Monday, February 7, 2011

Crit-on-Crits

Marty

Project 1
Fear and How Our Minds Can Miss Interpret It
Feb. 1, 2011

Suggestions the fellow students gave me:
Camera shots needed to be worked on.
The worded text from the bug was confusing and needed more information telling it came from the bug.
Leaving the animation in black and white made it difficult to read that it was nighttime.
The room seemed too narrow for the objects in it.

I agree with all of the above suggestions. They were all insightful and will help me in the future.

I need to research and learn the correct camera angles. When staging a room or any other setting make sure there is enough space for the objects. Take the time to show color and lighting to improve the information shown.

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