Mid-term V2
The revision of my project spatially made more sense than the first version. It did however change my topic from the first version, but I am going along with it to save time and it's less complicated.
It was understood that the farmer was angry that the robot destroyed his family, though the only thing that told that he had a family was in the second shot when he picked up the picture frame. The picture also told way he ran towards the house/the landing spot of the robot.
The beginning was a too fast, and needed more of a reaction from the farmer and more time for him to realize the meteor/robot was headed towards his house.
The farmer also needed more expression on his face when getting angry and upset over his family.
The ending also seemed rushed and add more expression on the farmer.
The list of goals I made early have been added to the project, except for the sound. Sound has been collected for the project, but I have some more questions before I use it.
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