Marty
Midterm_v2
During my first critique of my midterm, it didn't go as smoothly as I wanted it. I spatially didn't have the information I wanted and and needed for my concept and it lacked a solid conflict. with the amount of time I had to make version two I ended up having to cut somethings and change my concept around.
It opens with a farmer on his fields, he turns sees a meteor coming for his house and begins to run towards the house. The meteor hits the house and blows him backward on to the grass. While on the grass he sees his picture among the debris and it shows his wife and child. (This is why he ran towards the house, to warn them and save them) He then looks up and sees that it was a robot that destroyed his house and killed his family. He then takes his shotgun from the debris lying around and faces the robot. He then destroys it but after taking his revenge he still is sad about his family.
With the time I had, I changed my concept for this piece cause it visually makes since this way. It's overcoming fear through revenge, in doing so revenge changes nothing and it will not bring the farmer's family back.
I hope to work on it more later.
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